Run or rush? Eat or devour? Move or run? You can increase the power of your copy by increasing the quality of the verbs you use. Verbs show action, and how you describe that action can have a dramatic influence on your readers. Why would you want to fill your copy with indulgent words when you can conjure up emotions and visual images in the hearts and minds of your readers? Sure, “running” and “rushing” indicate that someone is moving fast. But “run” is a common and boring verb, while “hurry” evokes definite images in the reader’s mind.
Hadn’t he really thought about it? Should! You can choose common verbs like “talk,” “do,” and “like,” or you can electrify your copy with verbs like “talk,” “discover,” and “adore.”
Look at these examples to see what I mean:
Before
Down duvets allow you to stay warm
When it’s cold outside, crawl into bed and warm up with our genuine goose down duvets. There’s no reason to be cold when you can heat things up!
after
Down comforters let you snuggle up
When it’s chilly outside, slip into bed and snuggle up with our genuine goose down duvets. There’s no reason to shiver when you can snuggle up!
See the difference? The latter paints a more vivid picture of the dildo than the former.
check this…
Before
Whether you’re doing aerobics, Pilates, or any other workout, Ziox shoes will give you the support you need. Specifically designed for low and high impact indoor exercises, Ziox is created to keep you on track towards achieving your fitness goals.
after
Whether you’re doing aerobics, Pilates or another workout, Ziox shoes will give you the support you need. Designed specifically for indoor low- and high-impact exercise, Ziox is designed to keep you on track toward achieving your fitness goals.
What is the difference? Why are the “afters” so much more powerful than the “befores”? Because convincing verbs were used. Verbs bring the action to their copy. They give the reader (or at least should give) something to imagine. You need Super Verbs to engage your readers. For example, instead of just “get into bed,” we say “jump out of bed.” Instead of “being cold” and “warming things up,” we say “shiver” and “snuggle.” When you read that, you start to visualize what action is taking place in a very specific way.
Where do you find these Super Verbs? Wherever you look! Here is a short list. You can also visit free sites like http://www.thesaurus.com for more information.
Verbs vs. Super Verbs
- Accent – emphasize, underline
- Break – smash, crush, demolish
- Eat – consume, devour, feast
- Forgive – forgive, excuse, overlook
- Hate – loathe, loathe, despise
- Imagine: visualize, conjure, conceptualize
- Improve – improve, refine, perfect
- Jump – jump, lunge, tied
- Learn – discover, grasp, understand
- I like – admire, adore, appreciate, delight in
- Make – create, engineer, design
- Promise – swear, swear
- Reveal – manifest, reveal, reveal
Take some time to go beyond the ordinary. Find some Super Verbs to use in your copy to increase excitement and interest in the products/services you write about. That extra attention, which Super Verbs bring, can easily be correlated with additional sales.
By Karon Thackston © 2004
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